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No Resistance Is Futile

by Paul Ford
Illustrated by Kim Bost

Mon 24 Mar
2008

 

Six(1) words(2) can(3) tell(4) a(5) story(6) (while five is too small). Constraints (write without the letter “e”; use only one-syllable words; make every sentence exactly N words [see Oulipo and Georges Perec]) can force me (and you!) out of windbaggery and make certain things possible. Not long ago, tasked to review 763 songs at a swoop, I cut the review length to six words and suffered not at all.

Now when I face a new writing project, I open a spreadsheet. I want a grid to keep track of sources and dates, or to make certain that the timeline of a story makes sense. The grid imposes brevity. Relationships between sentences are exposed. Editing becomes a more explicit act of sorting, shuffling, balancing paragraphs. In this spirit, I'm rewriting some blog software to read directly from Excel. We'll see how that goes.

Socialist writer and textile artist William Morris said, “You can't have art without resistance in the materials.” Blessed and burdened with the most malleable medium in human history, we are overwhelmed by a surfeit of dross, battered by chatter. There are benefits to gain by adding, in the form of constraints, some resistance to the materials.

Paul Ford is the author of Gary Benchley, Rock Star, an editor at Harper’s Magazine, and sole proprietor of Ftrain.com. Kim Bost is a designer and Assistant Art Director for The New York Times Op-Ed page. For more information, visit KimBost.com.

Remarks 19 total remarks were added before the post was closed.

Mon 24 Mar 2008 at 04:37 AM
Wade M

Great article. I'd love to get more information on your excel technique if possible please Paul.

Thanks,

Wade

Mon 24 Mar 2008 at 09:03 AM
Dennis Eusebio

I was just recently working on a project where designers were tasked to design something and were given complete free reign.

No one knew where to begin.

Mon 24 Mar 2008 at 09:25 AM
Suzie

Fantastic little piece, Mr. Rock Star.

Mon 24 Mar 2008 at 12:12 PM
Reihan

Very insightful. I've been trying to impose tighter constraints on myself, and haven't gotten used to the discipline yet, but I'm cautiously optimistic.

I'm hoping to read Ford's manifesto on information design writ large.

Mon 24 Mar 2008 at 12:53 PM
Antti Haverinen

I agreed with Wade M. Would you mind if you clarify it concretely more? I could be nice to compare your fantasting idea to my visual sketching...

Mon 24 Mar 2008 at 01:54 PM
Paul Ford

For spreadsheet editing I just keep it simple. At work we publish a weekly news summary and everyone works in a spreadsheet with Date, Text, Title, Source, and URL. Add a blank line for paragraphs. That becomes this:

http://harpers.org/archive/2008/03/WeeklyReview2008-03-04

But then because it's pre-diced it also becomes this:

http://harpers.org/subjects/OsamaBinLaden

And thousands of other timelines. My problem is that once the grid is exported it's hard to add more links and cross-references. There's much rebuilding necessary. I want to make it possible for the content to never leave a spreadsheet. Constraints and convenience.

What I plan to do is use Apache POI to automatically translate a spreadsheet into an object that can be handed to an XSL processor to generate HTML (or RDF). I've also been looking at the different editable grids available for JavaScript with the idea that I could keep everything in the browser and have fully-capable textareas, and then I could just stow all my text with git. But I'm suspicious that this would scale to tens of thousands of items. Not sure yet.

Mon 24 Mar 2008 at 06:48 PM
Grant

Great article. Usually in design we just limit ourselves by time constraints, budget constraints, etc. But I think some of my best work has been done because of other creative restraints like the sxsw 6-word review example. Without constraints work actually suffers.

Mon 24 Mar 2008 at 09:25 PM
Stephen Tiano

Maybe ... but I've rarely read such mechanical-sounding prose.

Oops, 9 words ... and these.

Tue 25 Mar 2008 at 01:53 PM
Jack

"Now when I face a new writing project, I open a spreadsheet. I want a grid to keep track of sources and dates, or to make certain that the timeline of a story makes sense. The grid imposes brevity. Relationships between sentences are exposed. Editing becomes a more explicit act of sorting, shuffling, balancing paragraphs."

Please see NoteBox Disorganizer, the spreadsheet for writers:

http://mysite.verizon.net/squirreltech/software/index.html

Wed 26 Mar 2008 at 10:23 AM
Abraham

I completely agree. Constraints force thoughtfulness and clarity.

If you can't say it with constraints (particulary length constraints) then you don't know what you want to say yet.

Every post on my blog is 22 words. Doing that for a while makes 200 seem luxurious!

Thanks!

Thu 27 Mar 2008 at 10:04 AM
Mark

The form of haiku--
Like banks of a river flows
Creativity

Fri 28 Mar 2008 at 01:34 AM
Andrew

Five words can say much.

Four words tell stories.

Four words: stories told.

Three words imply...

Just two -

Or one -

Perkodhuskurunbarggruauyagokgorlayor-
gromgremmitghundhurthrumathunaradidil-
lifaititillibumullunukkunun.

Good discipline, good article, and fun. :-)

Wed 02 Apr 2008 at 05:31 PM
John

On the home page, it should be:

"...in short form—200 words or fewer."

Instead of "200 words or less."

Wed 02 Apr 2008 at 06:42 PM
Webdesigner

This may be a little off topic, but I really like the simplistic design of this site. Keep the good work up!

Thu 03 Apr 2008 at 07:34 AM
Runa

Six word can tell a story. Six words can tell about your whole life. I really liked this piece.

Sun 06 Apr 2008 at 02:09 PM
Immortal

You gasp. I sigh. We smoke.

Thu 10 Apr 2008 at 01:45 PM
Friseur

Excellent article, thanks for sharing this.

Fri 25 Apr 2008 at 01:50 AM
Jacob Halton

Isn't this idea kind of like what they teach us in design school when they force us to handset type, present projects as marker renderings, etc. so we're forced to think and figure out what we're doing instead of just clicking buttons in some Adobe program?

As a side note, even though a lot of us are more creative with restrictions, does anyone ever feel like they put unnecessary restrictions on themselves when they're working?

Sat 26 Apr 2008 at 05:37 AM
Thomas

In the German language exists a popular idiom that means:
"In der Kürze
liegt die Würze."
Translated word by word:
"In the shortness
lies the spice."
Or better:
"Brevity is the soul of wit."